planning

S.M.A.R.T Targets.

I understand it is important to set and aim to achieve a target during each session.  This Target Plan is my responsibility and it is to be brought to every lesson.

If progress with targets is not achieved, lunchtime catch-up sessions will be arranged, failure to attend these will result in disciplinary action.

DATE	SUBJECT Ideation- Research – Planning – Production - Evaluation	TARGET FOR THIS SESSION Specific – Measurable – Achievable – Realistic – Timely	REFLECTION  DID I ACHIEVE MY TARGET? What went well? - What didn’t go well? - Why?
28/03/2019	unit 8 - final major project	complete my pitch for 03/04/19, by a number of slides, yes this will be achievable,
25/04/2019	unit 8 - final major project	I'm going to write up my research on "isn't it romantic" which will be 3 paragraphs, it will also be done on the 26.04.2019,this is achievable and can be done by tomorrow, which will be done by 4pm tomorrow.	I didn't get isn't romantic up but I did write up my other research.
02/05/2019	unit 8 - final major project	I'm going to update my pages on blogger, by uploading my scripts, risk assessments

paper work.

this is my risk assesments for my locations to which i am planning on filming at.
to have a closer look click on the pictures.

the script

the first draft 

FAde In:

scene 1: ordinary day

Its just an ordinary day, the sun is shining, we see zoe putting her shoes on to go out for the day, she puts her jacket on and slings her bag on her back, she shouts.

zoe

I’m heading out I’ll be back late.

mum

Okay honey, do you want tea saving?

zoe

No thanks {she walks out the door}

She stops to close the door and put her earphones and plays her music, she starts walking to meet her friends she meets her neighbours on the way and other people walking down the streets, she comes to a stop and waits to cross the road, she sees the road is clear so she crosses the road and carries on walking to the park, she walks in to the park and sees her friends sat around when one of her friends notices her and calls her over and waves at, and every one notices to.

sammy

Zoe… you finally here…  {Zoe walks over and sits down next to Sammy}

zoe

Sorry I woke up like an hour ago

A few lazes a frown around and she gets nudged by sammy.

As the group got into the normal stride, they gathered around the swings taking turns in swinging and pushing talking about random stuff they start to get bored and plan to walk around the village for a bit, so they grab their stuff and walk on.

scene 2: the discussion

They carry on walking down the street and zoe has dropped back walking by herself, one of her friends notice and drops back with her to see what’s wrong

frankie

Hey

zoe

Hey frank

frankie

What’s up sloth

 zoe

I’m just thinking

 {Frankie stops and puts his arm out in front of zoe}

frankie

Are you okay does your brain hurt for thinking to hard {they both laugh zoe lightly pushes Frankie and carry one walking}

So, what you thinking?

 zoe

No stupid, and urm I was thinking about what life would be if it was different.

 frankie

What do you mean different?

 zoe

So we wasn’t repeating the same routine, it’s not that I don’t enjoy meeting up with you guys its just starting to get a little boring like we do the same things everyday we meet up and then we move to a different place then we stay there for the rest of the day and then I go home and sleep and repeat it never changes, even the conversation are the same, and I just want a bit of a difference to my routine.

 frankie

I get it, them lot {pointing to everyone in front} probably wont and would get offended but I get it, you not alone dude.

zoe

Thanks Frankie you’re a great friend {zoe and Frankie hug}

They stop hugging and catch up with everyone who didn’t realize they had stopped.

frankie

Hey why don’t we go somewhere different instead of the hide out its starting to get a bit boring there and it might be fun somewhere else…

{everyone stopped for a moment to listen, zoe began to smile knowing he was doing it for her, there was a few huffs, but everyone nodded}

everyone

Yeah where though

They all looked to Frankie, then zoe jumped in

zoe

hey why don’t we go to the back of my house and chill out for a bit there.

They all nod and start walking to zoes house.

 cross fade to next scene

scene 3: till next time

We see everyone sat round a table talking and drinking and having a laugh with everything that they where doing and zoe was quite but smiling.

blake

Hey, so I got to get going ill see you guys tomorrow yeah same time?

sammy

Yeah, I’m going to go too

They all get up and start hugging them goodbye

zoe

See you guys later, Blake, Sammy.

They head off and Frankie and zoe going back into their conversation.

frankie

So, you okay from earlier you seem a little bit happier,

zoe

I know it was small difference, and thank you frank you’re a great friend.

frankie

No problem sloth, and with that I must head off, mums probably gone and wondered where I am.

zoe

Till next time

frankie

Till next time

FAde Out: to balck for a few seconds

scene 4: something strange

We fade in to the front door and move to see zoe putting her shoes on but with a camo styled cloths, repeating the day before,

ZOE

I’m heading out I’ll be back late.

MUM

Okay honey, don’t for get to take the gun by the door for your safety love

ZOE

Urm okay {a bit confused, then she sees the gun at the front door, she picks it up and walks out of the door}

She stops to close the door and puts her earphones in and plays her music, she starts walking to meet her friends she meets her neighbours on the way but they all have guns weapons and the same people who were walking down the streets yesterday but with either camo on or with a weapon, she comes to a stop and waits to cross the road, she sees the road is clear so she crosses the road and carries on walking to the park, she walks in to the park and sees her friends sat around when one of her friends notices her and calls her over and waves at, and every one notices to.

sammy

Zoe… you finally here…  {Zoe walks over and sits down next to Sammy}

{zoe noticed that her friends all were wearing camo and had some sort of weapon}

ZOE

Sorry I urm… woke up like an hour ago {she said confusedly}

A few lazes a frown around and she gets nudged by Sammy.

So urm why do we have guns guys this isn’t normal.

Everyone looked at zoe confused.

frankie

You feel okay dude like there’s a civil war going on or something.

zoe

Since when…

blake

Since 3 months ago dude are feeling well…

frankie

Did yesterday do a number on you or something…

Warning sirens go off and everyone but zoe start to get up and grab the guns

frankie

Come sloth we got to go…

zoe

Where are do, we must go? {zoe gets up from where she was sat and picks up her gun}

sammy

To the battle field they’re attacking again.

everyone gets up and starts to walk of leaving zoe behind frankie holds back a bit to wait for zoe

zoe

Whose attacking? {zoe catches up to them with gun in hand}  

frankie

Come on it’s a village turf war… {Frankie looks at zoe seeing that she is very confused} you really don’t know do you?

zoe

No, no I don’t yesterday we were hanging out normally and not going to war, and I wake up this morning with my mother telling me I need to take my gun with me for my safety and I come to meet you guys and you all have guns, so yeah I’m freaking out here frank.

Frankie

Well stay with me okay and don’t go off well stay at the back, okay so stop freaking out and well sort this out dude.

They catch up with everyone else.

scene 5: the battle of the truth.

everyone ends up in a field where other people are grouping up on the other side of the field you can see the west side coming towards with the weapons, the east side is standing there with a flag waving ever so slightly and suddenly…

someone infront

CHARGE {SHOUTING OVER ALL THE CHEERS AND BATTLE CRIES}

Everyone starts running and zoe just stands there watching her friends run into battle but they are to far ahead for them to hear her she starts running to catch up with everyone, she starts to slow down she sees her friends get slaughtered Frankie is in front of her as he falls to the floor with his hand to his chest and falls to the floor beside him, trying to hold back the tears, they stay like that, while the battle around them carried on and then there was silence.

scene 6: i change my mind i don’t like this world anymore bring them back.

We see zoe crying with Frankie still in her arms, she looks up wiping her face with mud being spread across her face she looks around sees her friends laid around and everyone else scatted around a few people where running away because of what had happened.

zoe

{she starts to move and lays Frankie down she stands up and moves to each of her friends} okay if this must be a joke, you guys can get up now please {she shakes Blake} okay no one’s getting up, this isn’t fair.

She walks around with everyone laying on the floors no one moving.

zoe

Oh, I get its because of what I said yesterday that I wanted a different routine well this had gone too far guys,

 {no one moves}

I change my mind, I don’t like this world anymore, bring them back please.

She collapses to the floor and stays there for a long time.

scene 7: an ordinary day. but with a twich.

We fade to zoe laying in her bed she shoots up and freaking out, she rushes to get her cloths on and rushes down the stairs. She gets her phone out and rings someone.

zoe

Hey frank where are you guys, [pauses] okay I’m now coming be in five.

She rushes out the door and runs down the street not caring who she sees and where she ends up because she knows where she’s going, she runs to a stop, the road is clear she crosses quickly and carries on running until she gets to the park and doesn’t see anyone she stops.

She hears laughter in the distance, she starts to walk and she’s Frankie sat around the corner of the hut she jogs over to them and starts to hug Frankie from behind.

zoe

I can tell you guys this I do not have desire for conflict

the end

the final draft 

i edited the script because there was to much dialogue  

conflict desire 

FAde In:

scene 1: ordinary day

It’s just an ordinary day, the sun is shining, we see Zoe putting her shoes on to go out for the day, she puts her jacket on and slings her bag on her back, she shouts.

zoe

I’m heading out I’ll be back late.

mum

Okay honey, do you want tea saving?

zoe

No thanks {she walks out the door}

She stops to close the door and put her earphones and plays her music, she starts walking to meet her friends she meets her neighbours on the way and other people walking down the streets, she comes to a stop and waits to cross the road, she sees the road is clear so she crosses the road and carries on walking to the park, she walks in to the park and sees her friends sat around when one of her friends notices her and calls her over and waves at, and every one notices to.

sammy

Zoe… you finally here…  {Zoe walks over and sits down next to Sammy}

zoe

Sorry I woke up like an hour ago

A few lazes a frown around and she gets nudged by Sammy.

As the group got into the normal stride, they gathered around the swings taking turns in swinging and pushing talking about random stuff they start to get bored and plan to walk around the village for a bit, so they grab their stuff and walk on.

scene 2: the discussion

They carry on walking down the street and Zoe has dropped back walking by herself, one of her friends notice and drops back with her to see what’s wrong

frankie

Hey

zoe

Hey frank

frankie

What’s up sloth?

 zoe

I’m just thinking

 Frankie stops and puts his arm out in front of Zoe, Frankie starts to see if Zoe is okay by pulling her around, putting her hand to her head, Zoe swats the hand away.

zoe

What are you doing, I was just thinking that things should be a bit different.

 frankie

Different?

 zoe

So we wasn’t repeating the same routine, it’s not that I don’t enjoy meeting up with you guys it’s just starting to get a little boring like we do the same things every day we meet up and then we move to a different place then we stay there for the rest of the day and then I go home and sleep and repeat it never changes, even the conversation are the same, and I just want a different routine.

 frankie

I get it, them lot {pointing to everyone in front} probably won’t and would get offended but I get it, you not alone dude.

zoe

Thanks {Zoe gives a side hug to Frankie}

They stop hugging and catch up with everyone who didn’t realize they had stopped.

frankie

Hey why don’t we go somewhere different instead of the hide out its starting to get a bit boring there and it might be fun somewhere else…

{Everyone stopped for a moment to listen, Zoe began to smile knowing he was doing it for her, there was a few huffs, but everyone nodded}

They all looked to Frankie, waiting to know where to go, they start walking and end up at a secluded place.

cross fade to next scene

scene 3: till next time

We see everyone sat round a table chatting, playing cards, drinking and having a laugh, Frankie and Sammy are looking at a funny video on the phone, while Blake and zoe are messing around, Blake pushes to hard which makes zoe fall of the bench to the floor hitting her head and getting knocked out.

Everyone rushes to her side trying to wake her up.

blake

Zoe wake up (shaking her)

sammy

Zoe

Frankie

Wake up.

FAde Out: to black for a few seconds

scene 4: something strange

We fade in to the front door and move to see zoe putting her shoes on but with a camo styled cloths, repeating the day before, she stands up to walk out the door, she looks at the gun, looking confused, zoe goes to walk out the door, but stops turns and picks up the gun

.

She stops to close the door and puts her earphones in and plays her music, she starts walking to meet her friends she meets her neighbours on the way but they all have guns weapons and the same people who were walking down the streets yesterday but with either camo on or with a weapon, she comes to a stop and waits to cross the road, she sees the road is clear so she crosses the road and carries on walking to the park, she walks in to the park and sees her friends sat around when one of her friends notices her and calls her over and waves at, and every one notices to.

sammy

Zoe… you finally here…  {Zoe walks over and sits down next to Sammy}

{Zoe noticed that her friends all were wearing camo and had some sort of weapon}

ZOE

Sorry I urm… woke up like an hour ago {she said confusedly}

A few lazes a frown around and she gets nudged by Sammy.

So urm why do we have guns guys this isn’t normal.

Everyone looked at Zoe confused.

frankie

You feel okay dude like there’s a civil war going on or something.

zoe

Since when…

blake

Since 3 months ago dude are feeling well…

frankie

Did yesterday do a number on you or something…?

Warning sirens go off and everyone but Zoe start to get up and grab the guns

frankie

Come sloth we got to go…

zoe

Where, where are we going? {Zoe gets up from where she was sat and picks up her gun}

sammy

To the battle field they’re attacking again.

Everyone gets up and starts to walk of leaving Zoe behind Frankie holds back a bit to wait for Zoe

zoe

Who’s attacking? {Zoe catches up to them with gun in hand}  

frankie

Come on it’s a village turf war… {Frankie looks at Zoe seeing that she is very confused} you really don’t know do you?

zoe

No, no I don’t yesterday we were hanging out normally and not (violently gestures around), and I wake up this morning with a  need to take this (lifting the gun up) with and I come to meet you guys and you all have guns, so yeah I’m freaking out here frank.

Frankie

Well stay with me okay and don’t go off well stay at the back, (putting his hands on her shoulders) okay so stop freaking out and well sort this out dude.

They catch up with everyone else.

scene 5: the battle of the truth.

everyone ends up in a field where other people are grouping up on the other side of the field you can see the west side coming towards with the weapons, the east side is standing there with a flag waving ever so slightly and suddenly…

someone infront

CHARGE {SHOUTING OVER ALL THE CHEERS AND BATTLE CRIES}

Everyone starts running and zoe just stands there watching her friends run into battle but they are too far ahead for them to hear her she starts running to catch up with everyone, she starts to slow down she sees her friends get slaughtered Frankie is in front of her as he falls to the floor with his hand to his chest and falls to the floor beside him, trying to hold back the tears, they stay like that, while the battle around them carried on.

Fade to black

scene 6: i change my mind i don’t like this world anymore bring them back.

We see Zoe crying with Frankie lying in front of her, she looks up wiping her face with mud being spread across her face she looks around sees her friends laid around and everyone else scatted around a few people where running away because of what had happened.

zoe

{she starts to move, she stands up and moves to each of her friends} okay if this must be a joke, you guys can get up now please {she shakes Blake} okay no one’s getting up, this isn’t fair.

She walks around with everyone laying on the floors no one moving.

zoe

Oh, I get it’s because of what I said yesterday that I wanted a different routine well this had gone too far guys,

 {No one moves}

I change my mind, I don’t like this world anymore, bring them back please.

She collapses to the floor and stays there for a long time.

blackout

scene 7: wake up

fade in

frankie

Zoe wake up

Zoe is being shaken by Blake, Sammy comes back with a wet cloth she passes to Frankie.

Sammy

Is she okay

Zoe’s eyes start to open, everyone looking relieved she starts to sit up, Blake and Frankie either side help her to sit up.

zoe

What happened? (She’s looking confused)

blake

You feel and hit your head

Looking at each other they all look concerned with the change of face on Zoe.

frankie

What’s wrong sloth?

zoe

I just saw something weird. A different world of some sorts.

the end

story bored.

 the story bored shows from scene 1 to scene 3 in detail on how i want to film each scene which most will be hand held and some will be on a tripod to show the effect of real world and the difference between the film world.